The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Good rhythm and rhyme throughout this piece. I liked the flow of the question, God's answer, and "Joshua's" response. Good work.
Great message! I like the dialogue between the main character and God. I did have a bit of a problem with the flow in a couple of places and suggest having someone else read the piece aloud to you so you can decide whether you are satisfied with the meter. Otherwise, I loved this piece. Oh, that we were all modern-day Joshuas!