The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Point 1: I Love short, sweet and to the point entries! This is one of those! 2: the "awestruck" typo can be fixed easily.
3: Spacing between paragaraphs make it much more reader friendly - and also adds to the overall point you are making. Otherwise, very well written, and an enjoyable read. I liked it.
09/09/06
You could expand your description of the Colorado River before you switch to the application part. Good thoughts.