The Official Writing Challenge
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This was wonderful! Delightfully engaging with a few chuckles tucked in. Great job!
Love it! "Clever" isn't a good enough word, but you are, you are!
LOL! Too funny! This would read a little better with the first paragraph borken into several paragraphs, but very good!
Great dialogue - both human and angel! Layers of cleverness here...funny with a twist of insight.
Very interesting and a great character study.
This started out good, and it just kept getting better and it!
I actually read this last night, and loved it. Its sort of sad too, but very entertaining at the same time. Love Carl's last name!
Is this what that vacation did to you? You didn't go to the river did you? Loved the dialogue tagless dialogue. Hey, somebody just threw a rock at me!!! LOL Great writing!
Brilliant and creative mind. But I kept wondering about the paper towel? What was on it? Suddenly The angels came and interrupted my fascination with that towel. (lol) fascinating and unique story. "Masters"type writing.
PS: You did your research - there IS a mental institution on the Chattahoochee River. Good work.
Oh, William - did I ever love this! So clever and profound and funny and thought-provoking and probably half a dozen other adjectives that are escaping me right now. I especially LOVED the end! What a creative mind the Lord has given you!!
Very creative!
Very creative throughout, but I especially enjoyed the ending of this piece. "We are going to have to hit him in the head so he'll...start hearing God." Or so that she will, if I might add. Good work!
Congrats William!
William, Congratulations on a great win! Wonderful story filled with creativity and delight!
Sir William! Congratulations (again!)! You have a knack for giving us the most wonderfully human characters. I cannot help falling in love with every one. I hope you expand this into a long story, so we can see how this all turns out in the end. I'm so glad the Lord brought you and your talent to faithwriters, for our delight :)
Congratulations on your "Third Place" win!

God bless you as you continue to offer your gifts and talents to the Lord in such a wonderful way! Very, very well done!
Hi William,

Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this piece. I was a judge for the river challenge and this piece really made me laugh. It showed well how God has a sense of humor. :) Did you get hit with a rock before you wrote it?
May God bless you in all you do!
William, This is tops!! I'm glad I stopped by to read it. Bursting with originally, awesome characterization,'ve done it. :) And, likewise, I could learn a thing or two from you too. Blessings. Jo
How clever and original. Congrats on your high placement.
Loved the atmosphere, the characters and all the levels the reader gets to experience. A great 'inside-out' perspective - loved it! ;)