The Official Writing Challenge
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While you described your walk, I felt I was walking with you. Your writing was good but I'm not sure about the ending. Seeing Christ in the sky sounds too much like the 2nd coming and that's not what you were writing about. I think the story could have held its own without the image.
09/08/06
I agree with the previous comment. It seems the two events (walk with it's description and the 'epiphany') were too unrelated. Maybe a longer piece would have allowed you to make the link stronger. One minor thing - "But, no doubt about it, he did saw it!" I'm sure that was just a typo. I love to hike when it's nature as God intended.