The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/06
You had some very deep thoughts here. It would help a lot if you could split it up into paragraphs with spaces in between to make it more pleasant to read. Also, your poem could have spaces between the stanzas. Good truths.
09/08/06
Very difficult for a reader to have an enjoyable read without paragraphing and spacing. But thank you for sharing.