The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/06
You have an interesting message here using the Jordan River as your analogy. I'm not a poem critic. I like rhythm and rhyme in a poem ... but I realize not all poems are to be written that way.
09/08/06
I too, am a rhyme and rhythm person; but this free verse is nicely done.
09/15/06
PS: By the way, Congratulations on your Davey Award. Davey's are hard to come by. God Bless.
09/16/06
This is certainly on target for the topic, and your title, Source of Life, implies both the physical and the spiritual dimensions of life, which your free verse declares very well. I've noticed your name showing up in comments, here, quite generously. I'd like to welcome you--since I see you haven't been aboard very long--and commend you for jumping right in to the faithwriters fiesta! We're happy to have you here, friend!