The Official Writing Challenge
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So glad God showered her w/ a literal song to provide peace. I also liked this line about a more subtle, but probably powerful melody: "echo of the familiar sounds and taste of the beach that once again were as soothing to Beth as a song bird’s opus."
09/03/06
This one definitely had me jumpy - and I love how that simple song comforted her. Wonderful description!
Wonderful! I can see why you're in Masters!
You seem to have captured the raw emotion that a woman feels who has been physically abused. This piece would minister so beautifully to recovering victims of abuse. I love it!
09/07/06
Very well done! A good ministry tool ... great work! :)