The Official Writing Challenge
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I think anyone who has ever ridden a bus can relate to the ďlurchĒ you described in the first paragraph! I like the way that you allow your thoughts to turn toward inward examination Ė thatís something we should all experience as we walk with God. I enjoyed seeing that in your story! I would suggest paying attention to the questions you ask, and ending them with a question mark. Good job!
09/04/06
I liked it. it made me think about my music and what I like about it.
09/04/06
I like your parable-devotional. Such a subtle touch, folks might get the message without realizing it. I like your style!