The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way that you presented a biblical account in such a clear and imaginative way. I could really visualize what happened. Good job!
09/02/06
A creative and interesting retelling of this story. Nicely done :)
09/10/06
In our church we are studying the 10 commandments and Joshua. How real your story makes it all seem. You caused me to feel Moses pain. Thanks.