The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the beauty of this piece. We all feel unworthy at times, and in and of ourselves are dressed in filthy rags. How beautiful that the King wants to dance with us, and how wonderful that we are transformed as we dance with Him. Thanks for sharing!
09/03/06
Alot of work went into this poetic "Invitation". Just a couple minor flaws..."time is Wasting..not waisting"...and last verse...third line up; but otherwise very nice job. I liked the flow and also the message. Well done.