The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
Very sweet! May the melody of their giggles and fun always play in your mind.
09/03/06
Without paragraphing and spacing, this beautiful little story almost got lost in a maize of words all scrunched together. Great story of harmony that spells melodius sounds of laughter. Nicely done...just needs to be more reader friendly. I enjoyed the story..well done.
09/04/06
This reminds me of my own children. Good job.