The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
Wow!
That about says it - wow! I found myself wanting to hear the melody for this line: “Hallelujah! Salvation and glory and power belong to our God."
09/01/06
You had me from the first word, and the ending was great! I love that he not only converted, but then used his talents for the Lord. Great title, too.
Very well written. Powerful scenes and incredible ending. Thank you for this.
09/05/06
Wow. I loved this. I too was wondering what the melody was.
Great story!
09/05/06
Nicely done and well-written! Life will certainly be going on normally at the time of His return. We can only hope and pray more come to know Him before that time. Blessings.
09/06/06
This sent chills up my spine! So awesome. Your detail, your dialogue, your message - ALL of it, are wonderful!
09/07/06
Another mesmerizing read from the pen of Sir William. Thank you for your writing presence, here!
09/22/06
I meant to come back to this for a second read - it's so awesome, and I'm glad I did. A well crafted account and message - good work William!