The Official Writing Challenge
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Grandmothers have such a way of instilling prominent melodies!! The imagery and mood-setting in your story are excellent. Nice ending, with the realization of the real author of the song. :-)
09/01/06
Yup, alone but never lonely while the Master Musician of the Universe is right there waiting. Loved it!
09/01/06
What a great job painting the picture of your setting! You appealed to all your readers' senses, and we were right there with your solitary narrator. Excellent.
Very well written. I love the mornings so you had me hooked. You've described such beauty, serenity and comfort. Makes me want to set my alarm to wake up early and find some of it for myself... ok, maybe I'll just wake up when I wake up! But I loved your writing and where you took us, your readers.