The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/06
Canadian Geese are flying overhead as I read this, adding their music to a very pleasurable picture that you've painted here. Nice.
09/02/06
very creative and "different"...loved the last line. (I believe crickets rub their legs, not wings together) but could be wrong. Nice job on topic.
09/07/06
I truly enjoyed this :O) This is a great way to describe the "music" of the earthly choir that God provides. Keep writing and God Bless, Kaye
09/07/06
Very creative - I loved all the detail. Nice job!!