The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/06
This one sort of pulled me along...almost as if a soft, instrumental melody was playing in the background somewhere. I liked the allusions to musical terminology, too. :-)
09/01/06
Obviously written by a musician--this has a lovely musical quality--the words and the rhythms perfectly reflect the content. Everything a poem should be.
09/01/06
Very well written. I really enjoyed this. I loved the second paragraph most. The tiniest of details, all somehow involved in the great beginning of creation. Cool!
09/01/06
Oooops! I guess I meant third paragraph. Well written poem.
11/13/06
Please come and post your poetry at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/