The Official Writing Challenge
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This held my interest from beginning to end. The start of this was VERY effective - definitely piqued my interest and kept me reading through to the end. Wonderful storytelling!!
Why am I so drawn to these "hopeless" love stories? This is so poignant, so beautifully crafted, I feel as if it could have been my own story as it seems so real. Great writing!
this stirred up feelings in me, of moral anger and of sadness, and rememberance of other military "couples" I've seen in this situation. I like the way you kept with the feelings and didnt try to justify anything. Good job. A Davey for you!
You really know how to evoke emotion! Great love story, and the lyrics at the end summed it up well!
Author's note: Received a Davy Award for This one!