The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/06
This held my interest from beginning to end. The start of this was VERY effective - definitely piqued my interest and kept me reading through to the end. Wonderful storytelling!!
09/04/06
Why am I so drawn to these "hopeless" love stories? This is so poignant, so beautifully crafted, I feel as if it could have been my own story as it seems so real. Great writing!
09/07/06
this stirred up feelings in me, of moral anger and of sadness, and rememberance of other military "couples" I've seen in this situation. I like the way you kept with the feelings and didnt try to justify anything. Good job. A Davey for you!
09/08/06
You really know how to evoke emotion! Great love story, and the lyrics at the end summed it up well!
06/30/07
Author's note: Received a Davy Award for This one!