The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/06
Just like the parents tended to Melody, God tends to us - soothing our wounds and loving us. Very nice article, well written and good descriptions. :)
09/02/06
I know that dog, except her name is Goldie. Great illustration of a very important biblical truth.
09/02/06
Just loved this - warm, funny, and poignant. Several of your sentences are real gems - this is wonderful writing!
09/02/06
A lovely story. One suggestion I'd make and that is to let somebody read it before entering...as it has a few little errors that need editing or fixing - but overall an enjoyable read! Nicely done...and loved the ending.