The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/06
Love those old time spirtuals...but perhaps they only were sung when times were bad, so I hate to say that I'd love to hear them again; but I would without the added effect of a cruel plantation boss. Nice story.
09/04/06
I love your little narrator, picking cotton and singing and reminiscing. You have effectively plunged the reader right into the heart of your story.
09/07/06
Very original. I was there in the field with you. A DAVEY for you!