The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Excellent dialogue and great story all the way through.
01/17/05
Oh, I loved your story! It was very enjoyable. You are precious! Great writing!
01/17/05
Loved it! Very entertaining and with a hidden message.
01/17/05
A very interesting and enjoyable read. Great job!
01/17/05
Very entertaining.
A truly wonderful story, I felt like I was right there. I could see Cassy, with her curly red hair, trying to joke with Miss Dee; and moment later her eyes welling up with tears at the thought of a paddling.
Well, done, and thank you.

God bless,

Kevin
This is terrific! Grinning the whole way through.
01/18/05
Everyone has a first time of getting into trouble but yours is so touching and funny.
Great writing.Thanks for sharing.Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
01/18/05
i love that when we run away from things...DADDY...comes and gets us.
01/18/05
I loved the humor! First rate article.
Very well written story. I related to it all the way through!
01/22/05
I enjoyed 99.9999% of the story, but found the followin sentence a bit confusing: "My screams drowned out all sound barriers within a five-mile radius."

I think it should have been "overcame" or "penetrated" as sound barrriers "drown out" sounds, not the other way around.

Other than that one small thing, it was a great piece.

May God Bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
thanks, another piece i enjoyed reading. i just remember my highschool days
01/23/05
Beautiful,touching, great story. Keep it up.God bless