The Official Writing Challenge
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There is some powerful stuff here. Your images at the beginning about getting the bodies off the cross was great.
As I began reading this entry, I started to feel anger at the blood and gory details depicted in this story; however, I did a 360 degree turnaround as I neared the end and read the remarkable thoughts that went through this man's head as he rememered certain "details" about the man on the cross. Very, very good! Kudos.
Wonderful facility at getting us into this person's mind. Riveting descriptions. This is really, really good stuff.
I love this look at the cross from a working-man's eye view. I loved the language - the terminology - and the heart.
Thanks for sharing.

God bless,