The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
There is some powerful stuff here. Your images at the beginning about getting the bodies off the cross was great.
08/24/06
As I began reading this entry, I started to feel anger at the blood and gory details depicted in this story; however, I did a 360 degree turnaround as I neared the end and read the remarkable thoughts that went through this man's head as he rememered certain "details" about the man on the cross. Very, very good! Kudos.
08/28/06
Wonderful facility at getting us into this person's mind. Riveting descriptions. This is really, really good stuff.
I love this look at the cross from a working-man's eye view. I loved the language - the terminology - and the heart.
Thanks for sharing.

God bless,

Kevin