The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
Complicated read, but a creative work of rhythm and words. Thanks for sharing.
This is creative! I liked the first part as the author tried to guess why Christ was hanging on the cross. I got a little lost in the meter, however. I would suggest that you rework it a bit; perhaps you can tighten it a bit.
08/28/06
Excellent poetry, excellent message. I "got it", and I thoroughly appreciate your unique point of view.
08/29/06
Definitely an interesting point of view - very visual. Thanks for writing!
Nice poem. Interesting point of view.