The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/06
I enjoyed this POV and this "it could have happened like this" rest of the story.
08/26/06
Beautifully done. I especially loved this: "Trust in Me.” As we walked step-by-step up the hill, I felt the burden of sin in my life begin to lift. The weight of the cross shifted to His shoulder, not mine. When I tried to help Him carry it, He took it back." Great job.
08/29/06
A unique approach to looking at the crucifixion. I especially enjoyed the symbolism in the act of Christ taking the cross back, refusing to let this man carry His burden. Thanks for sharing this.
08/30/06
Loved this POV - and everything else mentioned by the previous posters!! What an amazing man and God our savior is!!
09/02/06
A very heartwarming and well written story. It brought a tear to my eye, if only we really knew what it was like that day....

Debra Elliott
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