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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: First (as in original) (01/10/05)

TITLE: The First Heartbreak
By Brenda Kern
01/16/05


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The First Heartbreak

It had all been so perfect!

But that shimmering perfection didn't last.

No, they ruined it.

If only they hadn't made that choice--so impulsive, so willful, so foolish!

What a terrible day that was, the beginning of the end. His children had changed, and He knew it. The plan was still good; allowing them to choose for themselves to do right or to do wrong would remain in place. But, oh, the pain He felt then, the dark sorrow.

The lushness of the garden seemed the tiniest bit less vibrant, as if the plants themselves knew of the grievous burden that had been placed on the shoulders of mankind. Shame had entered the world, with all its pitch-black tendrils.

The fragranced breeze just wasn't the same, and the animals were hushed.

In the cool of the day, as He was walking, God put aside His own deep anguish over the sin to reach out to the fallen ones, calling, "Where are you?"

Of course, many other poor choices have followed, a chain reaching from the beginning of history to the end, link by link. All of His children have listened to that same voice, felt that same momentary urge, and have given in.

But He is out for a walk!

Even through His pain, He is still calling for you, calling for me, just as He did the very first time His children broke His heart.

As He did then, in the Garden of Eden, He continues to long for and look for the fallen ones today, calling, "Where are you?"

Answer Him.


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darlene hight01/17/05
Very nice entry and I like the thought path.
Sally Hanan01/17/05
Nice! I like the call to action.
Debbie OConnor01/17/05
Very nice illustration. Great description and message. More would even be better!
Tesiri Moweta01/18/05
Sometimes i think it's necessary to just get people to know God rather than plead.
Nice work. Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
Joyce Poet01/22/05
Ah... just as the Lord searches our hearts, seems He has let you see a beautiful part of His. I am often blown away by His love for us... particularly for me. How much His heart must ache for the return of His own. Beautifully done!
Deborah Anderson01/22/05
Good job when you can pack a punch with few words. God bless you.
L.M. Lee01/23/05
thank goodness HE is always still calling us


   
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