The Official Writing Challenge
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What I like-I like your voice throughout. I like the flow to this piece and taking cross and using it the way you did.

What I might change - sometimes the usage of ... was distracting, some people might not know what OCD is ( I do) but it could confuse some, and the I loved the verse you used - one of my favorites. I might rework the last sentence too. Just my thoughts for whatever!
Now I'd like to read more. I love Ray who is like so many of us, trying to carry burdens the Lord never intended. Very nice writing job, thank you.
Thank you for sharing this. I feel a lot like Ray at times. If OCD is trying to please everybody all the time and never feeling you do or can, than you have tagged me. Thanks.
Yes! I think we all have a few of those "crosses" as well! If we would just learn to do as Ray learned, "Be still ..." Nice work! :)