The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/06
Good job, and you really tapped into Simon's fatherly heart--all his concern for the boys.
08/25/06
Simon's story has been written in so many different ways - and this one is unique because he brought his boys to town...showing still another side of this "out-of- towner who lucked out with a job angels would have died for. Nicely done.
08/28/06
I admire the "You are there" technique of relating a familiar story so it reads as news. Good job writing this!
08/29/06
Oh,this is wonderful. Creative and well written!