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This is a powerfully told bitter-sweet story. I love that you bore your memories and your determination and entwined it in the hope of the Cross. It would be easier to read if there were white space between your paragraphs. Well told, though. Thank you for sharing this story.
I almost did not read this but I'm sure glad I did. Hard, gritty writing with a message of hope.
You might want to seperate new paragraphs. it makes the reading easier on the eyes.
Thanks for sharing.
Wow - This is powerful, emotional writing. Your heart was fully open for the reader to explore. Wonderful. In Christ's Love,

Telling a life's story through the things left behind is such a touching way to tell that story. Good message, too, although it feels like I want to know more. Thank you.