The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful! Just beautiful! What more can I say...I'm speechless. Great job!
I am soooooo glad I'm not a judge this week. Great rythm, great message, great JOB!
This was beautiful! Very poignant and just moved so well. Great job!
Great job! One of my FAVS!
BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL POEM. But I would change one thing: leave out the dashes, they slow the flow of the poem and serve no good purpose.
This is just beautiful!! Wonderful rhyme, meter, message - everything! I also agree about removing the dashes, but that is the ONLY thing I'd change. Marvelous work!
Excellent poem! This was just beautiful!
Awesome poetry. This one deserves a win. In Christ's Love,

BEAUTIFUL!! Masterpiece!!
Beautiful poetry proclaims the message. This is a keepsake to treasure.
Incredibly beautiful! Masterfully done ... a winner, for sure! :)
I am so, so glad I finally found this one (and for the record, I still don't understand your first hint...LOL). Anyway, if I were judging, this one would get high marks across the board--it's nearly perfect. Put me in the "keep the dashes" camp, only I'd make them em dashes (--) instead. But poetry is intensely individual--do what seems best to you.

Have I mentioned...I LOVE this poem!
Amen, and what a day that will be! What a joy to read such well written words that inspire praise and joy!
Wow, Deb - this is beautiful. There's nothing to pick at; only praise to be given. This poem is nearly perfect in rhyme and meter with a truth and message that can't be denied. Great job! Jo
Biblically right on the nose, this is a beautiful rendering of the most important event in the history of mankind. Great work!