The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
A delightful story, on target for the topic. I have just one teeny question. Is it Mount Shadow? or Mount Morrow?
08/17/06
Has a fairy tale ring - nicely written and easy to relate with . good job.
08/23/06
An enjoyable tale. This could be nicely expanded into a storybook for children. I can almost see the illustrations. Very well done.
08/24/06
I really enjoyed this! Such a lovely tale. Great dialogue, too!
08/28/06
Thanks for the comments, everyone. I can't believe I changed the name of the mountain in the middle of the story. I'm never going to be indecisive again. The first name I give it will stick, or will it? ;)