The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
This was good and well thought out. Be careful with your tenses - they switched after the first verse or so to past tense.
08/22/06
Why doesn't this have more comments?????? This is just astoundlingly wonderful - like one of the old hymns. I'm definitely tracking you! If you don't think this is good, either you are wrong or I'm a terrible judge of writing. Wow, wow WOW!
08/23/06
Unique take on the topic. Good images in this poem. And you developed the idea so well.