The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah, the ancient cry of the man in the mud. If only he coujd know what lay beyond that next hill.
Thanks for sharing, and God bless,

Kevin
08/19/06
Thank you for this. Although I am familiar with Tennyson's poem (in part) I was shamefully ignorant about the circumstances of the ill-fated Charge. A strong piece of writing.
08/22/06
War stories generally bore me, but this one kept me rivited throughout! Wonderful description and characterization. I truly enjoyed this!
08/23/06
Very interesting title for this story. I was expecting a comedy, but instead found a tragic story that was very well told. The quote from Tennyson's poem made for an effective ending. Good job!
08/23/06
Great job. An enjoyable read.