The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
"The God of her hope" is a good line. This is well written and kept my attention all the way through. Is it a chapter of a book?
08/22/06
Yes. It should be a chapter in a book. Nice writing.
08/22/06
I like this (partly because I was on a similar wavelength for this topic. But I'm in Beginner's.) As others have said, this could be expanded into something longer (even a movie?) Hopefully our fiction won't become reality!