The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Sweet story. I like the descriptions you used. Flows well. :)
Your story struck a chord with me, because I had a wonderful neighbor named Grace (we children called her Aunt Grace). She was very much like the Grace in your story...an inspiration! Thanks for sharing.
08/22/06
Good telling. I would like to see more of Grace's story, as told in more detail. Perhaps just one episode in her adventure. I hope one of thos episodes fits into a future challenge category.

08/22/06
Very good story. Thank God for our mentors! This is a very endearing read and struck a soft spot with me too. In Christ's Love,

Julia
08/23/06
What beautiful, beautiful language here! Your descriptions and comments are so vivid I can see Grace in every paragraph SO clearly! Very moving and beautiful, Rachel!
08/23/06
One of my favorites this week! These beautiful words touched the depths of my heart. Mentors are gifts from God!
08/23/06
Touching story--nice job!