The Official Writing Challenge
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Terrific story-telling. You had me hooked - the twist in the amiable stranger was a show-stopper. Great writing.
Great story! I enjoyed how you pulled together the beginning and the end of the story with the "cold wind." Very nice writing.
Brilliant story telling. Some fantastic phrases and images - the shadow like Satan dancing, the wind agreeing through the cracks in the floor. Again I say, brilliant.
Well done! This would be the kind of novel my husband and I would read. Loved the flow of conversation; it was so natural. I could feel the wind, see the glow of the light on the wall, and cry out for sturdiness from the Lord as she quoted scripture and prayed. I'll be looking for more... that's for sure!
A compelling story...lots to keep the reader on the edge! Congrats on your place with this one!
Congratualtions Larry. Very, very, very well written. God Bless.
Great story! Congratulations on your win, and keep up the great work!
Great story-telling, Larry. Your attention to detail and your dialogue is awesome. Congratulations on your win and thank you for blessing all of us who read "Valley of the Shadow". Yours in Christ, Karen