The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/06
What a WONDERFUL lesson learned, beautifully described! Your details and tone are excellent. I really enjoyed this piece!
I like the way you wrote this. It was different and you kind of underplayed the danger you were in, concentrating instead on the beauty of your surroundings and the bounty of God's love. Nice work!