The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
An intense story of how decisions shape our entire life. Good flow to this, nice dialogue, easy to read.
08/18/06
Great writing with the dialogue very real. It kept my attention and I felt her pain.
08/22/06
Good story, but it was brought down a little by bad grammer. Don't use "..." and italics when quotes and commas will do. However, I liked the tension between the two characters.