The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Great read! Do we not all hold on tighter to things people want to rush in and take from us...either good or bad?
Interesting and kind of frightening. I read it with interest
You gave the main character a strong voice and with all the normal human instincts trying to do the right thing. You gave her humility at the end so I liked her all the way through. Good read
03/21/05
There is human interest. You didn't just leave the kid with his beer can as if it wasn't your concern. You did try to help. Sometimes anger blinds us to what we should really do.