The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Wonderful, wonderful writing. But the best of all is your conclusion, documented by the quotes you included at the end. It was an application I had never thought of, but which makes sense. Great job.
08/17/06
Extremely well written. You stayed the course and brought it home. And what a conclusion to draw! Very effective, I believe! Well, done!
08/19/06
You have put some great work into this piece. The historical perspective is great. I enjoyed it completely.
A nice writing! God Bless You
08/21/06
Liked the message and the history, but I would of started the story with one of the more descriptive following parapraphs. Perhaps the last paragraph before the break would have called me in a little louder.

08/22/06
I also wrote about the Welsh revival, my grandmother was a part of it, and told me stories of it as I was growing up.

This piece resonated with me because I could close my eyes and picture the scene set before us.
08/23/06
Wow - some great stuff here, a spritual history lesson.