The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Loved your descriptive phrases in spite of the fact that I was getting a little annoyed with the seemingly never-ending "like a …" There's a conundrum for you! But this is a terrific story.
08/19/06
I felt exactly the same as Lynda. I did enjoy it, though. Thank you.
I really enjoyed this...was sooo readable & touched the heartstrings!
Great images...I could "feel" the story, although I agree with the previous comment about the way they're presented. Great message about relationships...and valuing what's most important. :-)