The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
This was a great story but I didn't see the relevance to "shrewdness." Maybe it's just because it's Monday morning. LOL. Forgive me if I'm missing it but I really did enjoy the story and the perpective from Jesus' donkey. Very clever!
Blessings, Lynda
03/14/05
I agree that this was quite a cute piece. I also missed the connection to the topic, but it was still a really nice read.
Shrewdness can be a very hard word sometimes. I loved your story and I did see the word being used in several different areas of the writing. It is well written and I enjoyed it from the bottom of my heart. Thanks
I loved this one! Wonderful! Shrewdness does not have to be an in-your-face kind of attitude; it can be soft and quiet, like your donkey. Shrewd can also mean that you can make an on-the-spot decision. The donkey in your story did when he chose not to fight the rope around his neck. Wonderful story and in my opinion should get the top spot.
I did like this little fellow very much!
03/21/05
A 'shrewd' little story. It was very well told and held one's interest. One tended even to forget the shrewdness angle.