The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Nicely done with a sing-song tune. I like your descriptions. :)
08/19/06
Very nice. My favorite line, "they stripped him bare and ripped his skin
but with each whip died another sin."
God Bless.
I like it. There were a few spots that made me stumble, but otherwise very nicely done! My favorite lines are
"He took them up the mountain high,
He spread their wings and made them fly"
08/19/06
This is good. I liked it. In His Love,

Julia