The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
This is very powerful. There were a couple of small writing issues that attempted to draw my attention away from the message and into a diagnosis mode but the power of your imagery held me fast. In the end, I sit in tears at my desk wondering if I could ever survive the death of one of my children. Well done.
08/11/06
This story has a very powerful potential, but I believe it is buried, like a diamond in a lump of coal. Cut away the distactions to uncover the power.
08/12/06
Such a lovely vision you were given; and with it, peace of mind. Thanks for sharing.