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08/10/06
A really funny piece with a very sobering ending. You can't fool God. I enjoyed this a lot, although the change of tone at the end was a bit of a jolt.
08/15/06
Enjoyed the creative take on this topic. Great quips and fast pace really drew me in and kept my attention. Nicely done.
08/15/06
Sally, You've clinched the word "bizarre" with this one - but, it's sooo creative and fun! Can he whip me up a foreskin rug too? LOL :)
08/15/06
Extremely creative!
08/15/06
Hands down on unique and creative. Such tongue and cheek. God always gets the last word. I liked this a lot!
Like a little kid...arguing for the sake of arguing with no hope of winning. Hmmmm, how many times do we do this ourselves??!

Loved the foresking rug - whew!!
(wipes sweat from brow and hides embarrassment)

Loved the images of God and Jesus responding to the banter. :-)

08/15/06
Very creative and brave. God Bless.
Very creative. Really makes one think about the way we approach the Lord. Good job.
08/16/06
Definitely belongs in Masters! Creative, well written and a wonderful story!
08/16/06
I love God's reactions to Saul's whining. Very creative take on this one!