The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story! Well written and entertaining with a good point. :-)
08/15/06
One of the best first paragraphs ever! And the rest did not disappoint--but wowsers, loved that opener.
I loved the way you wove the rainy circumstances into the story, complete with awesome imagery! This is a message full of the pain of reality and the hope of recovery...something every reader needs to hear. :-)
I loved the way you wove the rainy circumstances into the story, complete with awesome imagery! This is a message full of the pain of reality and the hope of recovery...something every reader needs to hear. :-)
08/16/06
I found it hard to believe that she hadn't noticed that her guide was blind, but hey … I also think the missionary recruiter should be fired, but hey … This was a great read.