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08/10/06
Wonderful, the way the storm outside reflected his spiritual storm. Great writing.
08/11/06
This is your best paragraph, I think: "Then lightening struck. He was literally blown off his feet. It was as though he were touched by God. Thrown to the ground with a cacophony of sound exploding in his ears, he saw a new vision for his life - a vision of priesthood and teaching." The power of this sentence would have really drawn me into the story if it were the lead, instead of the middle.

08/13/06
A great story of THE Great Renaissance Man himself - Martin Luther. Where would we be today without his boldness and his strong faith that led the way to freedom to choose your religion faith instead of being forced to accept theirs? Nicely done, and written very well.
08/21/06
Gary,
This was well done. I enjoy your work. Blessings.