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03/14/05
The intensity of the situation was well described. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you!
03/14/05
This piece WAS intense. It captivated me from beginning to end. Wonderful re-telling!
Blessings, Lynda
03/14/05
This story held my interest all the way through, and I loved the originiality. A smooth, action-packed read, and I would say a top contender for first place. Good job!
Beautifully written. I would like to read the novel of this account. I bet it would be great. You captured my attention from the beginning to the end. I love reading about the heroines of the bible. Our young ladies need to hear about them. You've done a great job.
Quite a story-teller you are as you painted quite a vivid picture of the retelling of this account from the Bible.