The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/06
Beautiful, filled with charm and grace!
08/15/06
How wonderful! I read it, then started back at the beginning and read it again--twice--with something new and delightful discovered each time.
Singleness vs. union...interesting vision switch! I especially liked this stanza:

"He opened the proceedings
With a statement of his faith
Then gently let his witness speak, the only way
To prove his point, negating all objections."

This has sort of a nostalgic victory to it...to remind the reader that even if things don't turn out as we anticipate, God does something even bigger. :-)