The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
I would have loved to read this in story form; your third paragraph is rich with material that I wanted details of.
08/12/06
I agree with the prev comment. The third paragraph could have been a shining gem with just a little deeper work.
08/12/06
Yes, let's make it into a story.