The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt piece. I enjoyed your insights in this one. Great job!
08/12/06
Beautiful story, full of creativity, visuals, and inspiration. Great piece! :)
08/15/06
This is gorgeous--so much serenity and heart-felt emotion here.
08/15/06
A heartfelt piece spoken by one whose concern and compassion certainly make God smile. Lovely.
08/16/06
This immediately reminded me of a cousin of mine — she actually works at a spiritual retreat centre, a place like the one you described here - and has absolutely no peace in her life because she doesn't know the Peacemaker. Wonderful description of the outside and the inside.
08/16/06
Beautifully lovely, and lovelily (LOL is that a word?) beautiful. This is truly a portrait painted with words.
08/26/06
Great work. You are a blessing unto the body of Christ. God bless,
Bernard
www.bernardjonesministries.org