The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Very good, you really did a good job of portraying Samuel's personality.
08/12/06
Nice re-write of the Bible story of little Samuel; however, he never called Eli "father", although Eli called him "my son" many times. (Matt 23:9 forbids the name "father"). Loved this story and enjoyed it immensely. Good job and well written.