The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Love the title, the excerpt from one of my favorite hymns, and the gentle mood of this little story. Be careful of switching back and forth between past and present tense. This tender story spoke to me.
08/12/06
There is wisdom in this story. Rarely do we get a story from the pulpit view. I enjoyed the pastor's care and tenderness toward is people.
08/13/06
Aside from some grammatical errors (primarily tense problems), this is a precious story of the Holy Spirit's wooing, comfort, and healing. I loved it! Great story! :)
08/16/06
A portrait of a pastor with a heart for God, thank you for sharing this story.
A delightful story. Currently we don't have a pastor right now, but I hope we recieve one similar to the one in your story.
08/16/06
The tense problems did NOT distract from this wonderful story - I especially enjoyed the pastor's perspective on this. Wonderful writing!